Here is your writing prompt for today.
Use the story starter to help start your own story or write your story all on your own.
Rewrite the 'sick sentences' to make them 'well' - remember to choose interesting words with lots of WOW nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, and add lots of detail and description.
There was a house on a snail. The snail was big and twisty. It floated in space. There were lots of stars.
Here are some sentence starters that you could use:
Strangely, there was a tiny house on a slimy snail. Hanging suspended in the milky way like a tornado or a cocoon. Silence hung in the air as if it was waiting for something to awaken...
ReplyDeleteWeirdly there was a house on a giant paper wasp nest suspended in a supernova after a star died in silence waiting for a black hole to appear.
ReplyDeleteweirdly, there was a tiny cottage looking house on a slippery slimy snail. The snail was as big and as twisty as a zooming roller coaster. It floated in space like a pool floaty in a crystal clear pool. There were billions of of stars that looked like a flashing light!
ReplyDeleteWeirdly, there was a tiny house as small as an ant, it hung on a goey snail. Hanging awkwardly in the universe like a giant shell, silence stayed in the mysterious place like if it was waiting for the world to begin...
ReplyDeleteNice job
Deletewe all said weird!
DeleteWeirdly, a mini house sat on a gooey snail. floating there, as twisty as a tornado. Surrounding it were thousands of stars bursting with brightness. It was as silent as night.
ReplyDeleteStrangely,there was a small home on a slimy snail. The snail twisted like a tornado drifting in the middle of the shiny,bright milky in the silence waiting to go to earth...
ReplyDeleteWierdly, there was a precocious house on a ancient snail. Tiredly, Sleeping On the trunk of the tree, The Huge spiritual light started to emerge
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Room 25 this is my story. Weirdly, there was a ginormous house the size of a phone on the sticky smiley snail.The snail was twisty like a licorice and it was big like a log.It wondered in space were the aliens lived.There were stars everywere!
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